All Comments on 'The Journey Ch. 01'

Well told.

Well written.

And understandable.

Why can't more foreign writers take the care that this fellow took.

Excellent work.

If you mean by that the author is not english-first-language, you must know more than the profile reveals. Knowing no better, I would have guessed UK.

Great story. I love it. Keep up the good work.

Lost me with India!!!

welcome to literotica.

indian women have both maternal and sexual beauty. indian teen boys is being so interested that how their typical mother will looklike with any cloths r in a swimsuit.

and they would love to see their mothers nude ass more than a panty or bra.

in next part u must be describe about his mom Nina's nudity, espacially her nude buttock. cause women nude ass is a treasure to the teen. at next part of it do not forget to describe something about india when they have reach their own house there. and try to avoid the other character like father daughter brother etc. mother and son need to be alone in the plot.

Awesome buildup...one of the best stories that I have ever read... please post the next part soon

This chaper was a good prelude to a story and set the main characters but left the story hanging.

Awesome..need a second part..keep up the slow pace...it really build up the story well

big thx HubrisMaker, great start, great story..

love the way the son gets jealous !!

plz more xD

5/5

Good story development. It is a shame that the son does not accept his mother as a female human. A human who has the same needs and wants as he does.