All Comments on 'The Kelpie's Lover'

What a wonderful story...Thank you for sharing.

Bob

silly US authors would stop writing even sillier stories about my country.

Especially when you demonstrate your ignorance by using 'taunt' instead of taut... and there were others too.

Guilty as charged. I write about silly American stuff too. Do not mean to offend. :) Just writing free smut. Thank you for reading!

I really like the story line. Any thoughts about continuing with another chapter

Hello;

I have the next chapter finished and many more to follow. I am nervous about posting with the issues with my editing so trying to spend more time proofing before posting.

...just to let you know, Contest submissions are supposed to be standalone pieces of work, not multi-chaptered. (I've extended a submission at a later date myself, but the initial piece was written and intended as a standalone.)

Added to that, I'd say it was probably NH, not Mature. ;)

Good luck.

Please give us more of this wonderful story!! So hot! Keep writing!