All Comments on 'The Kid in the Candy Store'

A good story. I liked the characters and the story line. You could let this run a few more chapters and let them explore each other. Go camping or to college together. Thanks for your time and imagination. 5 stars.

hope you do more with this, maybe add mom in on the kids fun?

I enjoyed this story because your pacing as the two discover each other's sexual interest was measured and believable. That they both had qualms about going further seemed real. I would love to see how their relationship develops and how it will be more difficult to keep it from their parents.

I agree with 2 cents comment !

Good story that had a good flow to it. How about adding mom & dad? That would make for a wonderful family!

I like the story but at the beginning you said she shed her panties. Then crawled on the bed and took them off again.

This story is right up there as one of my faves. I was starting to lose faith in literotica but you showed me there's still some hope left :)

5 stars. i like the tale - as with the other comments, adding mom and dad could be fun!

she's 19 so she is a woman, but has no hair??? kinda silly to look like a six yr old. does she have no pride as a woman?

Looks like Kelly is one horny bitch and like any horny guy Eric is eating it up. Incest is a wonderful thing. FIVE*****.

I liked it; 5 stars.

Great story, a second chapter would be great. Well done so far. 5 stars

sissy was hairless. bro likes the child look...

Great story, but there's always trolls. GTFOH with the bare pussy comments. It's simply a matter of preference. Some women like being clean shaven, and some me, the majority likely, like them to do so. If you like the feral jungle look, good for you. But dont knock those who like it the other way. And by the way, do you say the same about legs and armpits? I'm sure you like bristly cactus legs and brillo pad armpits, right? Because it's the same thing. Preference. Again, GTFOH.

That was no ending. You left it hanging. Maybe there is another chapter. I will look for it. you still earned 5 stars.

Nice little story of revelation and awakening. That last line was a bit cheesy, but I guess you had to get the title in there somewhere. 5/5. Now onto the conclusion.