All Comments on 'The Lab - Discovery'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Not quite a story

Seems like you posted before finishing

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Incomplete

This story is unfinished. Sad to have something like this posted.

badreamerbadreamerabout 7 years agoAuthor
Unfinished

Thanks for the comments!

The story is not unfinished - it's just a first chapter.

The rest is comming soon. I have several more chapters in the works, should be posting them over the next few weeks.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Reading both chapters doesn't explain why she's doing it and solids like she will continue to. I don't see ant romance here, just a cheating cunt even if she's being blackmailed or forced for promotion. Which one ofthoseseema to be the case because she seems disgusted by some of the act . In part 2 she tells him she's pregnant and blow him and he makes her do the same to him the guy did. How could he stay with her and she tells him she will continue . Please explain and give hubby some balls. He was a happily married father so after she explains the professor needs a really brutal beating and divorce papers for the wife even if he stays.

badreamerbadreamerabout 7 years agoAuthor
Repercussions

Thanks again for the comments. I'm glad you are following the story.

The hubby will get even in a specific way, although there will be no violence.

rightbankrightbankabout 7 years ago
I do not understand why this is in Romance.

But it's easy to see why the score is so low.

LW maybe, but even the Tag calls it reluctant.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Hhhmmmmph. Yep, sure enuf it is what it is. Filth, pure & simple. LP

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