All Comments on 'The Lady and the Delivery Boy'

Incredible combination of sweetness and nonconsent. I hope you keep writing. Such a fan

Well done. Nicely written. Nothing wrong with it. Lots of skill in rendering her prudishness and her introduction to real pleasure and Dhani's Indian-English. I liked both characters.

Well written; characterizations consistent throughout. Perfect final two graphs.

Well, this is a lady after my own heart. I too have a reluctance to jump in bed from the get-go. I like to know a bit about a woman's background, something that suggests her sexual history. Listen and learn. I've avoided a couple skanks there were dosed and diseased. Patience and consideration. If they don't like being romanced, there's no point in bedding them. Screw them, certainly. I don't need their grief.

I could perfectly imagine both of them, and came to really like them a lot. Not to mention their story was succinct and wonderfully hot because of their interesting dynamic, so I wouldn't mind reading more about their future times together!

Very well written. It would have been even better if he had fucked her mouth first.

I enjoyed it enormously.

2bad you stopped writing...*****

loved every word..