All Comments on 'The Lady Inside Ch. 01'

...Of it, don't care if it took a while to warm up, don't care that it was one page, don't even care that the storyline's wildly swerving all over the place. But you better write a second chapter Sophie cause those last couple paragraphs... left your readers wanting more... lots more... hope you had that in mind.Cheers! --- Josie

Thanks, great tale look forward to more

Awesome. Loved it.

this was great start. we need to know more about the narrator as he quickly has bi tendencies that we did not know at start, maybe ditch the girl friend or let on that she is trans, otherwise good descriptions and plot is more or less plausible

Never met her when in Cabo !

thank you, I'd love to meet someone like that !!

I love the story.