All Comments on 'The Landlady - Rent review'

You rushed the story of his takeover. The end result was inevitable but the way it happened was poor. Not a word of protest, no threats, negotiations, no seduction. Within minutes he goes from normal to full slave.

When a fanrasy enters your head it takes a bit of skill to bring it out as an erotic story. You don't have that skill.

Full of clichès like "call me mistress" and "slag".

You must have thought you needed to put every nuance of your mind into the story to fill the page.

Awful.