All Comments on 'The Last Boy Scout Ch. 02'

I love your writing and this story is no exception, please keep it up

Satisfying three plus women in one night means his carnal skills are not inconsiderable. Yet those talents might be surpassed by his penchant for diplomacy and intrigue. The downside being that there is no multi-party cat fight on the horizon.

So a tag team match of Miss Shannon the teacher and Teri versus the buxom sisters, complete with yowling and pulling of hair for Alex's love is completely out if the question? Just sayin ...

I was kinda hoping he picked Julie. Lisa is a nice little slut he can have on the side. Julie wouldn't mind isn't she the one that said nothing behind her back you wouldn't do in her face. Nice story though.

Okay, do you know what I like most about your stories? Besides the fact that you bring us well-developed characters, you create a group of people who either already respect each other, or are capable of developing and earning that respect.

Yes, anyone can write a group grope scene, but you've given us real people who care about each other, and that makes the sex come across as better. At least in my opinion.

4 commets and favorites 0 views? Counters OFF on views? From the first one I read 'Accidental Nudist's' to this, your newest. I Loved reading em all. Keep it up!

You just always leave me wanting more!

Thanks for sharing....

You have been one of my favourite authors here for a long time. Your stories are always a little out there, fantasy, but grounded. Somehow the scenarios are almost plausible and the relationships have that ring of truth and grounding. The aspects of the interplay of the characters is just a lot of fun. Keep it coming.

Another chapter soon I hope. Great job with this chapter.

I am addicted to your writing. Cant wait for the next installment.

at story end. Since you write her as only a couple of years out of college and Alex as VERY mature, only six years difference in age would make that relationship an excellent possibility. If that punches your Muse's button at all, why don't you give us a good multi-chapter tale about that?

You are definitely the best writer on here.

thank's

You blend erotica and actual literature perfectly. Not only does reading your stuff get me incredible aroused, I feel it will make my writing better as well. Thank you for your contribution sir.

I really enjoy the story line and your development of your characters. Your vocabulary was also impressive. I learned a few new words on the way.

Found this by chance, and recognized the author after chapter 1. Absolutlely love this story so far. I was simultaneously ridiculously turned on and dying of laughter. You've got fantastic story telling ability, and as an Eagle scout myself, I'm loving the do-gooder getting his reward plot. Thanks for sharing the story.

This one is a real winner. Not only is it truly original and almost believable, but very, very well written. I could not put it down before finishing the whole thing.

All of the characters are interesting and mostly likeable too, with surprising reactions and growth. It's so good, the sex is almost like gravy on top, in spite of the fact that the relationships, romantic and sexual is at the very core of the story.

All in all a fucking great story.

Thanks a lot !

Part of best series in this category

Simpley amazing. You have outdone yourself with this one (and thats saying a ton, cause all your stories are great).

I love this story! Best I have read in a long time. Thanks Tex!

Awesome story amigo. That there is some smokin' hot palaver. Keep up the good work!

That was a fun read with a Great finish. If I`d been there, I would've helped out too. Just for the leftovers. (LOL) When those gals thank you, they leave a lasting impression. (And then some. lol)

Again, My Compliments.

but I can't figure out how you are going to make them better than this one.

One of the best story chapters I've ever read on Literotica!

at times I laughed, at times I got excited, what's more to ask ?

great writing style

I had this fantasy for like forever. Back in my time I tried to carry something similar out in RL, twice, actually. Both times there just something little didn't click, the storm missed us, so to say, both actually and figuratively.

Wow! The scene in the dark with 4 Horny teenage girls, incredible!

I really enjoyed this novella. It is incredibly erotic but done with such class. A true adventure.

What an absolute load of shit. Reads like the script to porn. Shit doesn't happen in real life like this.

Great story with characterisation, plot and lots of lovely fucking. Keep writing this good stuff.

but what if someone searches for fffffm but doesn't find this story because it's only tagged as ffffm?

good story

Awesome fucking

Beautiful writing

This Story is in My Top 10 for sure . Great job of Writing

The writing is so good it almost made it believable. Then I remembered it's a story about 4 (5?) girls fucking 1 guy. Stuff like this doesn't happen in real life so I feel that the realistic writing paired with the unrealistic concept is a contrast that's a bit jarring

Awesome

Bubbling along nicely!

I’ve run out of things to say. I’m just gonna vote 5 stars for every chapter.

Hot and steamy and so ooh la la...!

Great story, very well told

All That Rain. I Felt Cold And Damp

Loved the story and just to think, that some guys actually get to have experiences like this thrust on to them. The rain though. It was necessary to plunge the camp into survival mode but wouldn’t it have been great if the sun came up hard and bright, steaming the tents dry in short order and drying all the clothing and equipment. Of course, everyone would be hoping at nightfall that the temperature would drop and heavy clouds would roll in. The camp would be configured much better to survive and anyway a hot day would be forecasted for the morning after. A chance to do it all again as the rain begins anew.

Good job, thanks for sharing your work!

A truly great story. Very entertaining. Thank you. I think I will have to have a closer look at some of your other efforts.

Thank you again.

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