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by LaRascasse

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Interesting

The story is going very well. Please post the next chapter soon.

LoneStarRiderLoneStarRiderover 12 years ago
Better!

Much better than #01, in my opinion. Looking forward to more insight to Portia.

lawrenclawrencover 12 years ago
Two bright people

The best relationships involve two people of intellect who are both physical.

mzglennmzglennover 12 years ago
Wonderful

This is a wonderful series so far. I have enjoyed reading both of them.

KatieTayKatieTayover 12 years ago

I think you balance tension with payoff quite well. I also like the Macbeth analysis sections, speaking as a former Arts major. Theatre and banking are a nice combination.

alfeoalfeoalmost 11 years ago

Maybe add some more chapters?...lol...thx

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Great

Story,drew me in. The protagonists were excelent,I really liked her.

Usually authors don't have the balls to let the incredibly dangerous woman help her man by being woman from hell, she usually gets a formulaic death.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
so good!

Such a fine piece of work. Please update ASAP.

oldbearswitcholdbearswitchabout 6 years ago
Why wasn't it finished?

I mean it sort of is finished, but why not flesh it out.

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