All Comments on 'The Last of Her Kind Ch. 04'

Aaaah the cliffhanger so painfull and fit together with the next page trap where the last page is basically empty :). They talk to each other so its great. Its what i hoped for :). I rly hope its not going to end too soon.

5/5

Usually not a big fan of bug-girls, or in this case, Arachne. But Ana really shines with your writing, and I like her.

Thank you for sharing. 5* Slainté

I can’t thank writerannabelle enough for pumping this story out so quickly. The plot twists and tension just keeps ratcheting up and keeping me hooked on this story. I will admit that I want the completed story so I can just binge to my hearts content on this tale. This story is so good, I’ll probably reread it when it is completed.

In the last part it said: "He had never really had his dick sucked, or not well anyway."

In this part though, we have: "He was no stranger to blowjobs,"

To me, they seem to be opposing statements?

Might have been an intentional retcon on your part of course, but thought I'd mention in case it slipped past editting.

I am looking forward to how you develop their relationship. Thanks

Gotta clear them out before Ana finds out about them...

I really cant wait for the true reveal, and the reaction by Darren.

Though I'm not a big fan of spiders and such, I'm honestly liking this story a good deal! You have a good plot, great and believable characters and of course, the ever present threat of danger! I'm also liking the fact that it can tie into your main story, which is flat out awesome! Keep going!

Please keep it going, but don’t rush it !! Take your time and don’t let people push you too fast and ruin a good thing :)

...or in this case, belfrey-hanger. You do this way too well. I suspect you are reincarnated from one of the writers of Saturday afternoon cowboy serials, or some such. Bravo.

I'm enjoying the story so far! You're right about spider girls don't get enough attention. I'm just scared for these two romantics though. I hope everything turns out right for them!

Ana from the pair of hunters intent on her elimination, or Darren from Ana's spidery instincts? This is worrisome.

And where is the great page-break warrior ABierce in these times of Annabelle having no story remaining for Page 4 ? I see that this also concerns Smutol.

ABierce started this discussion some time ago when the administrators removed the ability of authors to control the position of page breaks. (There were those who thought this was trivial, but it's just another step backward for the site for those of us who see this sort of thing as important.)

Ah well,

Lue

More...please!

Hey Annabelle, I am loving this story so far, in fact even more than HFHM. That being said, I do have one small comment that will help improve readability:

When Darren is having his PTSD visions and conversations with people who aren’t there, could you italicize that text? I have found a couple instances where I’ve had to reread portions because I couldn’t separate the past, present, and Darren’s phantoms.

Keep up the great work though.

From what we've been shown, it doesn't really seem like he could really help her in a fight against the warrior, but perhaps he could combat the mage. The almost strange dichotomy that she's still likely stronger than him, despite the difference in muscle volume is fascinating.

Of course, now he knows a secret. He's shown himself to be patient and understanding in some respects, but his instincts are nearly as strong as hers. Like hers, they also seem to want to fight this romance- one hopes that after the reveal, and perhaps some conversation, they'll have a meeting of the minds, in addition to a meeting of... well, you know.

Could do with one of those arachne. That venom could solve a lot of problems!

Looking forward to a 4th page - poof, now I have to wait for the next installment. (8-)

Great story! Please don't stop writing.

Great Halloween story Annabelle! Hope she doesn’t eat him. I want them to screw, go Rambo on these guys and run off to Bigfoot country together.

Another comment casts a little doubt about Darren’s abilities against these guys. As far as a straight up fight sure, their powers put them on top. But as a vet who spent some time around guys that went to Vietnam, no matter how badass you are, you do not wanna play hide and go fuck yourself with anyone who did a tour in the bush lol. It’s not gonna be fun.

I like the way you place little... things in your story. Like the bee. It's refreshing and makes the story feel real when I'm picturing it. Makes it seem like a memory.

Patiently waiting for the next chapter.

Happy writing.

I love your work. So please take this only as constructive.

Page 3 when vision Cutter is giving him shit “Do you think you're crippled little nympho would still look at you the same way if she knew what you did over there?"; your’re should be your. Easy miss. No big deal. Just for future copies.

Keep up the fantastic storytelling.

It's impossible to count just how many authors have as good attention to detail as you do.

Please, for the love of us readers, keep up the amazing work!

Great work!

Good lord, you can write! I feel in love with home for horny monsters, and then this. Fantastic!!! One thought. Wouldn't it be cool if they were to show up at Mike's? I think they would fit right in, and since you've already forged a link, it would be great. Maybe somewhere around ch. 47 or 48. While I can't wait for the rest of the story, I don't want to lose these two after this story is done. Just a thought from a big fan.

The quality of your writing in this series is, IMHO, much better than your other two series. Maybe that is just a function of the perception of the reader and not any change in the ability of the writer. In any event, your work is very enjoyable. Please continue to keep us so well entertained.

Love this story! This plays out well, characters I can relate to and get invested in their well being. Can almost picture the scene of the place in my mind, coming from a small farming community in New Zealand myself, and knowing family that served in the military, during the war.

Great story, great writing can't wait until it's published as a light novel ;)

Your stories have such a good nature about them, I'm hopeful for both of them. That's my comment of #4. I'll keep reading--please keep sharing your wonderful imagination!

At first I thought this story was just something on the side, but after reading all four chapters I really think this is something worth appreciating all on its own, not just a HFHM spin-off. The characters are just amazing!

Though the thought of Ana eating Darren is horrible!

It's getting better with each chapter. Well done.

Well, crap, I knew it had to change pace, and soon...

On another note, I actually went to the wiki to look up what kind of... monster? Hannah is.

She seems prescient at the least, perhaps a mind reader or pattern/future teller?

It's quite entertaining the way she does these little 'magic tricks', but you don't put any emphasis on it, just letting it run as a gag in the background, so much fun!

Thanks!

Again, your integration of the experience of 'nam into this story is not only the truth, but the unforgiving truth.

*Key in Metallica*

"He had never really had his dick sucked, or not well anyway."

Then

"He was no stranger to blowjobs"

Which is it?

I like this story very much. I'm glad I read this one after HOHM, it makes me think what might happen...5 stars!!!

Itshay going to hit the anfay!

This is so lovely and really making my day. Thankyou.

Aw heck.

Amazing story, on second read, I think it'd work great even without the supernatural elements, but that just elevates it to awesome territory.

Enjoying it a lot!

What's with the waitress and how does she tie into the story line in the long run is the real question

The pace seemed to kick up in this chapter, part of me was excited for the progress but another side was sad to lose the slow and steady character progression. I really enjoy both main characters and even a few of the side characters (the sheriff especially). Thanks again for creating this for us.

An slow pace ant intimate chapter this one. Is it the calm before the storm?

For me pag4 4 of chapter 4 is blank except a note from the author at the top. Is that correct?

OH😯

We (the readers) know where the spiderweb comes from ...🤔😉

Mmmmm, naughty Annabelle, cum kisses. Love it! 😋😋

Sexual healing, my beloved

It doesn’t work all the time, but every time it does, it works 100% of the time

Really enjoying this. I'm caught up on hfhm and d&h, finally catching up on this. Different pacing and mood but really liking it!