by YDB95
I like this story. You’ve done very well with your plotting and pacing and I’m now going to go see what else you’ve written and I hope there’s a lot.
A pleasant, slow read. It's a bit confusing at times because Tom seems to have walked into the middle of a story. The pace probably matches the setting.
You said, "that's another story for another time." I too would like to read that other story some day. That was the only thing that startled me.