All Comments on 'The Last Summer of Its Kind'

by YDB95

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
I like it

I like this story. You’ve done very well with your plotting and pacing and I’m now going to go see what else you’ve written and I hope there’s a lot.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
I wanna see how Angela and Tom hooked up

Keep it going

lazy_readerlazy_readerover 5 years ago
Pleasant

A pleasant, slow read. It's a bit confusing at times because Tom seems to have walked into the middle of a story. The pace probably matches the setting.

You said, "that's another story for another time." I too would like to read that other story some day. That was the only thing that startled me.

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