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All Comments on 'The Layered World Pt. 01'

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DrizdartDrizdart11 months ago

A very quick intro to a complex character and situation.

I'm hoping you will be able to deliver subsequent chapters quickly.

WhoGivesAShitWhoGivesAShit11 months ago

Interesting start, but it feels like there’s missing information.

linnearlinnear11 months ago

Oh this is looking to be spectacular.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Joshua? Jay? Huh?

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