All Comments on 'The Lesson Learned'

This is a good story...however would that have really happened? They had never talked about it, and from nowhere her husband had cuckold fantasies and she wanted a more controlling man? Even with these questions, 3*...

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And yet again it is all about how SHE feels so great

and husband, well to hell with him, who cares

just so long as her meal ticket is still good that's all she cares about

Just like all the other wife watchers today, does she real have concern about him, no

will she set up a hot young woman for him to fuck, hell no

no this is just a formula story with a formula ending

Same ole same ole cuck bullshit! I see so many of these and wonder what does a limp dick hubby get out of this? Humiliation,disrespect,mistreatment always while he is paying the freight for everyone? If your little dick gets hard reading about this type of thing you may want to get some help. If you write about this type of thing cause you love it don't bother getting help your life in a living hell already!

I hate cheaters even with some concent but the whole description was totally hot. I would not even have allowed the dance and probably would of been pissed about the smile earlier but I'm all about respect and not making others think that they are making a pass in front of the spouse. People get off on that and I hate it . Nothing makes me crazier than when everyone knows about something behind your back , to me that is the worst part of cheating. After my rant I will say again your stories are very hot

But this was really good. It was less about cheating or cuckolding and more about just having fun.

Good story.

And this one is excellent.

A nice take on the "it just happened" scenario.

Just a couple of minor typos.

Thanks,

MGM

I just lined up an editor proofreader. I have some stories in the queue but after that the proofreader kicks in.

Thank you for the nice comments.

Respect is about honest communication and honor. If you have that then you can have a strong marriage. If a husband can give a gift to his wife without strings and a wife can welcome the gift with thoughtfulness and honor it, what is the problem. Outside sex in a relationship is a razor thin path, I've never seen it work in the long term in real life. I know it does, but I've never seen it. This story is well done, for the type.

As others have said, I don't tolerate Bull takeovers, arrogant cuckoldry, humiliation of the husband. But this was a serendipitous encounter and very well described. For the husband and wife, I belueve this would be a no harm/no foul encounter that 'just happened'. In my life I've had one vaguely similar but it was by prearrangement. She wanted rough dominance but he was a truly nice man who could not meet that need. After a few meetings without an actual scene, this was reminiscent of our first time although without D/S. 'Roger' stroked himself off because I told him to. There were many more encounters after that.

Thank you for a great story.

A great story. As stated a couple of typos, but a very erotic story. It played out smoothly at the end and the husband got wet seconds. I fantasize that this scenario

would play out in my marriage and my wife could experience the thrill of taking on two cocks in one night.

I liked this one, thank you and keep them coming. 4*

You've got this right for me. I love husbands sharing sexy wives but too many are portrayed as wimps. Glad you've found a proof-reader to eliminate those annoying typos.

I found your story very pleasant and hot hot hot. Just the kind of situation I would love to share with my wife. Extremely enjoyable, just enough tease, just enough pressure, just enough resistance, just enough approval, just enough acceptance, and just enough hot wet sex for a start. Four stars and can't wait for more.

When trying to worm your worm into another man's pussy it's bad form to be bossy, especially if the guy is bigger than you. Its much better to act and be appreciative of any favors either of the couple bestow and keep in the flow of erotic taboo, say like asking for a little piece of heaven owned by someone else.

Very erotic. I love all your stories! Of course It couldn't happen in real life...or could it?

The progression here is believable,and she is a real woman amazed at her boldness, and the acquiescence of her husband. A near perfect erotic scenario...

Wonder if the "husband" would have lent this guy his Rolex, or his favorite golf clubs? Naw, the whore is one thing, but something precious? Keep you hands off!

Just another male fantasy of women as sluts and fuck toys. Dream on, you miserable moron.

miserable dim wit for read stories he hates. Fuck you dear annony Gave this a 5

Both the husband and wife had fun, a hot time that you could imagine happening. Good that you're getting a proofreader, the your/you're mix up detracts from the reading experience.

because asshole bonnietaylor2/vastiesmith2 made a comment

to offset the asshole of LIT's vote

To offset that whore's bonny comment

My Indian brahmin wife had once wore skirt and danced with a handsome man and later they fucked in front of me

Wished it would happen to me and mine

I noticed a rude, unfavorable comment on this story. Fuck him! I love your stories! I find myself for the first time looking on the "Author" link to see what you have added. I have been hoping for a follow-up to "He Let Them Have Me."

This was very hot, nice build up and pay off.

Thanks

Cant wait to read more of your stories. #5

usual shit from another WHORE "author".

Incredibly hot story. 5 stars.

And "Anony-douche"...just give up and go away.

...very hot!!

Good build up, great story!

Well constructed, quite believable, and a good amount of detail. Looking forward to reading your other stuff. Thanks!

Top story, well written and not too long. Perfect.

Usual great story from a great author

Vote 1* for 𝐓𝐇𝐄 𝐅𝐀𝐓 𝐃𝐔𝐌𝐁 𝐓𝐑𝐀𝐍𝐍𝐘 𝐖𝐇𝐎𝐑𝐄™ (that's what her clients call her) aka BONNIE/VASTIE aka NEEDYOU200 aka ANON!

Very real to life story. Almost exactly like my wife's first time with another man. Except ours was on a cruise. Five from me.

Ignore the trolls. They really are not worth anyone paying any attention to them. A possible scenario, and fits the desires of any that enjoy the Loving Wives category. Funny how they keep reading the stories they say they hate, but can't seem to stay away from.

Couldn't help but wonder if the entire scene had been setup by the husband with someone he met on a site like WifeLovers or similar. You will do a Part 2 I trust.

Sometimes it takes something like this to ignite a marriage

Your wife fucked as many men as she could until she passed away. Hope you live a 100 years so you can bitch and suffer the idea of her enjoying each one more than you!!!

fuck got an erection, reading about some dude fucking another dudes wife. otherwise porn with words. would i get a hardon if i wrote a story about my wife fucking some strange man. probably not.

In other words, collaboratively or independently manipulated scores and favorites. Three reasons for this conclusion:

1) Number of favorites vs number of comments ratio is inverse of generally all writers in LW category. All stories of this writer has nearly twice as many 'favorites' compared to 'comments' where normal trend for LW is that there are twice as many comments as favorites for any given story. Clearly a team of supporters ready to favorite stories en masse.

2) Among the majority male, pro-consequence driven readership of LW, where cuckolding stories average lower scores than other story types, this writer's scores beat best pro-consequences writers. This just does not compute! This is a good writer, in my rating he/she is 6 or 7 out of 10, compared to classy writers like angiquesophie or girlinthemoon ( in my opinion 9 - 10 rated writers) and yet her/his scores in this anti-cuckolding domain of LW are unexplanably high.

3) Negative comments on any of his/her stories are very few and far between and probably have very short shelf life or never even see light of day.

But then who am I whinge? Looks like the writer is tired or retiring. Only 1 story in 2017 so far compared to the profusion in 2015 and 16. Thanks for the stories. FZC

This writer has high scores in all categories. The author's lowest scores seem to be in LW. Maybe she's just a good writer.

Maybe that legion of helpers that favorite stories are called fans. Seems you read a lot of her stuff and keep spreadsheets on comments vs favorites.

I like this writer. She did say in one story she was going to delete negative comments, but then they started appearing again. I assume she gave up.

I have seen instances where it said comment deleted by administration

usual shit from another WHORE "author".

The closet cuck anons like to search out LW stories. Reading them extends them to a full two and a half inches, the longest they've ever stretched. Like a good monster movie they descend into uncharted depths of what they find most reprehensible. Then like classic monster movies, the Sunday School teacher in them wins after all and the moralizing begins. With self-righteous indignation, they condemn the very ideas that had gotten their dud bottle rocket burst of an orgasm, and give the story zero stars. If you notice carefully they will sign their review with their true identity: "cuck fag shit".

pissing off the wannabe cucks!

5 stars!

Did anybody ever tell you, you're one sick fuck? I believe you're the idiot that goes around the cuckold stories calling everybody a closet cuckold. Like I said, sick fuck.

No comment on story, don't read this author. Unusual high scores on mediocre stories are questionable.

What about 121 favorites? Still questionable?

Sorry, but I just don't see anything at all special or compelling about this bland story. Congratulations on all the fantastic scores though. You can't fake that, can you?

I love wife stories. But id never let someone else fuck my wife. Id just like to be tge stranger who gets fucked. Selfish but true.

Too bad some of your readers obviously have psychological/sexual issues that prevent them from enjoying good stories like this one.

It appears you got the problem. Nobody can think like you that doesn't have some issues. See a shrink soon, you need help.

Color me with that brush anon 10/17. If psycho/sexual issues keep me from enjoying cuck/whore stories, then give me more.

Especially since he doesn't know how many diseases she now has? What their Father learned was that their Mother is a slut. He saw an attorney and filed for a divorce. End to the garbage. And to the commentator that was impressed with the number of people that "liked" this story? That's about 13%. Which means a huge percentage of the readers DIDN'T like this. Dumb ass.

Know why these people write these awful comments why would you read a story like this in the first place. For me I loved it the husband getting the sloppy seconds is one of my favorites if it was me I would have ate her first then slid my cock in her. Another part I liked was when she gave her husband her thong only wished he would've smelled them and tasted them. Still a great story.

Dang! That confident guy got the best fucking of his life! Hubby is a lucky guy too. You can really write a hot story. More, more, more!

I gave it 5 stars.

No black man with a telephone pole cock, that made the wife cum dozens of times. Three very compatible adults who reached an unspoken agreement, and enjoyed themselves. No mention of gigantic cocks and 'Who's Pussy is This?" scenario. Also, No guilt trip about what will people think of us. No Moralizing and just going on with their marriage as before. Well, I guess new experiences together, by consenting couples, can serve to strengthen a long time marriage. Very well written. Low keyed and erotic.

That was a really wonderful loving story. The willingness of the husband was a silent assent to the narrator’s obvious desires. Every step was an increase in desire, both for the narrator and the reader.

As usual by this author a well written story. Very erotic at times, great how the lover seduced her husbands mind, as much has he seduced her. great sex

Whore and cuck meet a stranger. Ain’t that special.

Oh how I'd like to enjoy the same scenario . We are going away this weekend too

What I love about the way you write is that you describe every day people, and step them into scenarios that are believable and could really happen given heightened desire and arousal. Well written, believable and when you get to the sex, you rock it!

The little boy haters don't like these stories

Another lovely story by this author. The build-up with real people and no extra the top porn type scenarios. Love it!

Really liked the development of the process: the edge of submissiveness but not demeaning; experience through the eyes, mind, and feelings of the woman; the aspects of the husband that indicated acceptance and support

Very nicely written! I'm not surprised you're a woman.

Very well done

Consistently the hottest stories.

This is bullshit real people don't act like sex crazied maniacs no man I know would ever let another man have sex with he's wife the guy would end up in the emergency room.

Interesting, technically a cuckolding story but it felt more like a voyeristic S&M story. Very sexy

hell of a story, I wish my wife would fuck other men, I'd be half way to heaven...lol

I have this experience from time to time when we travel with local guys at hotel bars who think they are "doms". The part I always like is when he finally whips it out, to see my mostly dressed wife laugh at him saying "that's it?", which invariably causes him to turn to me, at which time he sees me holding his wallet, cash and driver's license in my lap with my cell phone saying "say cheese" which usually causes my wife to go from laughing into hysterics. They're always mad as hell, but I always carry a 16d nail with me and when I see them turn red, I pull out the thick steel nail, put it between two fingers and seriously bend it with my thumb and a menacing look, which almost always brings them back to their senses. I've only had one time where a guy tried to then take me out. He got as close as my fist, and got a broken nose and a trip downtown for his efforts. We laughed until we cried. My wife is 100% great! Previously, I always wondered what these a-holes were put on the planet for.

Then I realized: entertainment!

What a a hot author, always end up Sat in a puddle after reading a story by them, erotically minded, God I am so happy, reading this. I am always so aroused and end up having a wonderful orgasm, there should be a cover charge.