All Comments on 'The Lessons Ch. 08'

fantastic.. Dont stop now.

wow.... that was really great. Cant wait for the next chapter. Don't take too long.

Is the male lead named Alan or Teddy? Many readability problems pepper the story (e.g. "grown" for "groan," unclear diction, wrong words entirely). The story's premise is certainly interesting, but can the dialogue possible get more stilted and awkward?

I loved the story in itself, and all of the former stories so far. However this one does have alot of errors, as you call Alan, the male lead, Teddy quite often. Go over the story once more for errors like these - simple mistakes that can make or break a story.

nice job so far, cant wait to read the rest.

I have seen this (what I believe to be be an) error so frequently, that I believe that this must be the spelling in some parts of the world. Is this true?

Larry Brown

Petaluma, California

the errors mentioned by others, so perhaps they were corrected. I have noticed some misspellings and grammar and usage problems, but they are minor, and I try not to let them interrupt the flow of the story. I just want to sit back and enjoy the experiences of the various characters and try to put myself in each situation. That's more fun than grading a paper! This was a good one - wonder when one of the students will REALLY get it for the first time. Hard to believe the spanking episodes, but those naive kids took the bait and ran with it - more power (and sex) to them!

I like it that you make the story more formal like a lab report. Nice.

Most professional.....do you think a vaginal study and possible an anal study MIGHT be forthcoming?? Once those studies have been written up, perhaps a comparison study or two, "The Effect of a sound spanking on sexual intercourse" ?? or "The Effect of 3rd party Involvement in Stimulation During a Sexual Encounter"??

Keep up the great work, Charles!!

to be experimental...and young..wish I was innocent again!

... but a bit disconcerting that you kept switching between calling him Alan and Teddy ...

So fresh, so playful...you have the gift...thanks again for a great read!...hcl

Writen with many details, which it makes a wonderful writing. It is a shame the mistake about names ... ¿Teddy? Teddy is lucky boy by meeting Penny.

Other than the wrong name the story just keeps getting better and better.

You changed names fromAlan to Teddy and back again paft way throuvh this chapter

Fascinating,imaginative, descriptive and fresh, unlike many others.

Kudos