All Comments on 'The Librarian Ch. 06'

Incredible writing, very lucid and easy to paint a mental picture... Never saw that ending, out of satisfaction of accomplishment we had sadness. :-(

BRAVO!

Part of me wants this to end here with her willing sacrifice, and part of me hopes there will be a final chapter with a meeting with sloane. Either way, thank you for your fantastic writing.

Woow it was so gud rgt from start till end. U r brilliant writer. Nce n erotic one. Meghadixit923@gmail.com

This is one of the best stories I've seen on this site. Other than some typos and grammar errors, it was captivating. The characters were developed nicely. There was enough sex to keep you interested (and hard), and a surprise ending I certainly didn't see coming. Of course you're pulling for Sarah and it took a bit to realize she was finally at peace with Drew. Well done!

Terrific storytelling

Back on track after a relatively poor chapter last time and the ending was a surprise but I liked it because I do the same thing in my stories if it fits in. The problem you now have is making the next chapter as believable as the rest of the story. Taking into account the quality of writing so far, ignoring for once the multitude of errors, I’m looking forward to the ending.