All Comments on 'The Lieutenant's Adventure Ch. 03'

I didn't rate this story because i didn't finish reading.

I was at first attracted to your articulate introduction but then as I scanned further down and saw those long exclamation I immediately stop!

Sorry, just not my cup of tea. I can't stand long exclamation. To me it's childish and cheesy. Only extremely amateur author will write in such a way. I won't say I'm well read but never in my life I've ever read any serious author even though they write fictions will write in such a manner.

I can't rate you 100 as i didn't finish reading but neither am I going to rate you 00 since I didn't know how was the overall. So 50 was appropriate. Maybe if you clean those long unnecessary amateurish long exclamation up in your next story I will read it and rate it accordingly.