All Comments on 'The Line of Succession Vol. 03 - The Final War'

Good one!

Another good chapter!

5

That'll do bear, that'll do. 5*

Wonderful imagination and writing! I am really enjoying this series! Can’t wait for the next episode! 5 STARS all around!

A really good SF story. Please keep it up. Great characterization. Five stars.

Your first foray into sci-fi is an unqualified success, a certain 5/5.

Do not be a stranger to this genre, you are good at it.

I thoroughly enjoyed your excellent tale. More please!

Can't wait to see what's next.. thks 😁👌✌️

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Well this story tanked. What was hyped as more romance etc etc from submittal 2 turned out to be a literal blow by blow battle story. And showed the princess’s true colors. Cal should dump the cheating woman while he can. He doesn’t need another wayward wife. Too bad this story started out looking promising only to flounder in the third act.

I do think there is some future conflict between the princess and the Lt. Very good so far. When is the next chapter coming out?

0 stars for no finish.