All Comments on 'The Lingerie Incident Ch. 02'

I believe that your story 'The Lingerie Incident' - Chapter1 and 2 are very interesting and well written which is a major change for Literotica.com. Some constructive criticisms are as follows: I eliminate the second introduction since you did a good job in explaining yourself in Chapter 1. Also I would eliminate the Roman numeral dividers as they tend to be a distraction to the reader.

I'm not sure that there are NO misspellings, or all the grammar is perfectly correct, but your stories are MUCH above average -- as well as being hot. In fact, I think that holds for all of the stories I've read -- and I've ranked all of them as "5". [You are the ONLY writer that knows that the word meaning tight is "taut", not "taught".] Keep up the good work!

Whose baby W ill it be.

Based on time it should be Kim's

Can't wait for the next chapter