All Comments on 'The Lingering Scent of Jasmine'

And I enjoyed every page of it. Suppose if I needed an oil change her mother could extend the same hospitality to me?

Thank you.

Very well thought out, written, and presented. Another few chapters would be nice.

I would've appreciated more story. The two characters connected awfully fast — no suspense and no obstacles, doubts or challenges to overcome. Their immediate affection for each other and the words they use describe it seemed (to me) over-the-top and not really believable. I'm sorry, but it just didn't seem plausible or engage me.

Like others would have enjoyed a longer version with some chapters of them enjoying life, possibly children & his involvement in her family business. Still worth five stars. Kudos!!

Tongue up her ass, then kiss her? Really? Not my cup of romantic tea.

The way you have written the chemistry between these two with the touch of the past woven in is a truly good read!

Great piece of storytelling. You truly have a Southern soul!

Beautiful in some ways but mostly implausible...just don't think it works that way but then it is a story after all...

Great story to read right before bed. Puts me to sleep everytime.

What a good balance you hold between her sexuality and his - I really appreciate that both partners enjoy both anal and vaginal sex and all kinds of fun with food and licking and sucking.

I guess I would have liked a bit more buildup about how they got to be so hot together, the speed of them hooking up felt a little implausible.

I wondered shy she had to be younger than him? I'm wanting more stories in the "mature" category where both partners are mature (not your problem :-) just expressing my wishes