All Comments on 'The Little Voice'

WOW! NICE story. I picked this out of the blue and I got lucky. Well written, articulate, and just plain hot!!!! YUMMY. This will be mentioned on the New Story Review thread on Lit's Bulletin Board in the Author's Hangout forum.

I love that Olivia knows what she wants and obeys "The Little Voice" in her mind..A girl expressing her needs and desires is always a turnon...Had Danny been hung like us normal guys, (laughing) this story would be a 100...

Another here who likes the 'Get thee behind me Satan' voice being used within the story.

Don't we all have a little voice like that used within us?

this story was really hot. I Loved it, I wish i was her brother

I can't believe that the little voice in my head is telling me that I should suck my wannabe big brother Miro's dick. Oh well, he can't even put a comment on my story. Lillian, you go girl! This story rocks!

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Hope there is a part 2