All Comments on 'The Local Ch. 02'

Do we yet what Brian did to warrant over the top revenge or did i miss it?

Annony is a talking pile of pigshit! GAVE IT A 5 TO OFFSET HIS SAD BUT USUAL 1 VOTE ON EVERY STORY ON HERE.

...well good for her. What's good for the goose is good for the gander. If Brian "has needs" she can't meet while away, and takes it on himself to "satisfy those needs", no discussion, no direct communication of any kind, well, then he needs to experience being on the receiving end of that bad news, too.

It sounds to me like may she'll discover she's found a better substitute and will kick Brian to the curb.

Well, no one can say he didn't have that coming.

For the read.

Local garbage.

for a revenge fuck story it was pretty mild. No real character development. Not much anger in her or pity from him.

Gyenge írás,kár volt olvasnom!

Who the fuck are you kidding? You're the Brian in this story....

Again left the ending hanging without a finish. This should have been part of first part of The Local with a third page to finish story and maybe more work on first page to adequately get a real background on the different characters