All Comments on 'The Long Absence: Angie's Story'

This Loving tale just made it onto

my top twenty all time favorites listing.

Please see what you can do about

getting this made into a Starz quality

movie starring Christina Hendricks....

thanks for the compliment! However, I was thinking it could be Angie Everhart. That's who i pictured in my head when writing this. Though your suggestion is great too.

What other commenter posted.

Description sounded good. Comments support, but do NOT see the story on this page! WHERE is it at?!

is the admin not uploading the story correctly? maybe it's a propegation issue - where it takes awhile for everyone to see it once published. any forum posts on this?

refresh the page and the story will appear. or go back to the my profile and choose it from there. not sure why it's not fully appearing after the initial publish by admins.

As long as I get to play the son. Older women are so hot.

This is a great story. It can't end in a cliff hanger.

If I had of known it would end this way. I would have passed it by.

I hate "cliff hanger" stories.

Why are your stories based on a scum of the earth whore???

But don't make a mother a whore especially when it wasn't matching

Very well written story. I thought for sure there was going to be a threesome or two.

Thoroughly enjoyed this story. Character development of the mother was in-depth. Wish the son's character development had been as well constructed. In the beginning, the mother got what she deserved. The son did not; therefore, the need for more character development. The mother's emotional and sexual development toward the son was good. I am glad this did not develop into a menage a trios' or any other group participation affair.

Ugh. The old pattern of sluts / cheatets for female protagonists. Again, never got past the first page.

5 stars. Certainly shows the benefit of an editor after your first story which was full of errors. Well done lovely story

Loved it 5 stars !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!