All Comments on 'The Looking Glass'

people lost their minds over this flu...Covid-19 is not the flu and your reference to it as the flu has put me off to the point I will not read anything you write again.

To anon regarding Covid19 not being a flu. I know very well that it is not a flu. My character however does not. Like many people who said much the same thing when this pandemic started, he is ignorant. My characters views are not always my own. They are built to be flawed, and in this case be a reglection of all the people who said the exact same thing before they realized how serious the situation was. I'm sorry you won't be reading anymore of my work. Your loss.

SoB

Well well written story. Love the build up and character development. Please more chapters to this story

I know it's a contest entry but would love to see more

I do hope that this is a start to a longer series...much like your "women's studies" series.

Such a hot premise I do hope it is explored with subsequent chapters.

And we all thought that it was "just a flu" at first...until it became obvious it wasn't...duh!

That was an incredible story. So hot!!! He got to play in his cousins clothes and undies and find himself. The big surprise was that she knew all along.

Great story, thanks for sharing. Looking forward to more. 5*****

Really loved it and I'd definitely read more if you were to expand on it.

I for one would love to see how Lucy's life unfolds.

I have to say this is one of my favorite stories through this pandemic

There is so much the reader can relate to and those early feelings of guilt

I live this work and have added it to my favorite stories and you as a favorite author

Thank you very much and please continue with this I would love to see what happens at Christmas xx

Please write more. I loved reading your previous work and this was just as good, if not better.

A nice amount of foreplay before moving to the climax.

I found the crafting of your characters to be believable. The underlying storyline of a young teenager stuck in a foreign country alone with his own devices during a pandemic to be very relatable. I looked forward to the protagonist slowly succumbing to his inner desires and I was invested in his tormented frustration alongside him. The only thing that jarred me from the story was the mothers discription of the pandemic. It just struck me as odd that someone would mispronounce the word giving it a cute name. It was early in the story and neither good nor bad just my observation. I enjoyed reading from start to finish. The sad realizatin on the last page that the story was ending has left me wanting more. Please if you find some time write another chapter, you are a gifted story teller. Warmly Miss Sarah Luv

Loved this story! So vivid and intriguing and if course very erotic!

What a beautiful story, I was completely drawn in to your characters, finding myself wanting to be Luke, or is it Lucy. Definitely one of my favorites, can't wait to hear about Lucy's Christmas trip.

Wow, thank you so much for this fabulous story. I can so relate to the addictive desires of dressing in lingerie. It just feels so good.

The restraint of the lock down and the collar was a great combination. The thrill of being watched from afar was so delicious. Umhh.....

I really liked this story and would love to see you continue it. Thanks.

I very much loved reading this story. It had a great build-up and a wonderful follow through. The surprise ending -- and I usually think surprise ending can be contrived -- worked very well. It was a great read. Five stars, for sure.

Being a long-time, committed TV/CD this is one of THE BEST threads that Christine has encountered on Literotica. When I'm "enfemme" and "indulging myself" while immersed in these stories, Crissy's sissy psyche slowly unfurls and I becum a naughty Slut. You are a gifted writer, quite insightful and descriptive. Thanks for sharing this story. I hope that Lucy will eventually return to London when the travel bans are lifted. SissyCrissy6245............ xoxoxo

more please

Easily the best quarantine story. I really want to read more about Lucy. Fantastic writing.

I had enjoyed your "Women's Studies" chapters. This story was delicious! More Lucy please.

I was enamoured with "Women's Studies" and replayed scenes in my mind for days on end. This story has gripped me in a similar fashion and I'd be very grateful to see more of Lucy and co. You're an amazing writer and I love your plot arcs, it's an experience to read your work.

THANK YOU!

Women Studies is my favourite series on Literotica... and I really hope this could be the number 2, or maybe even replace it?

Love the slow process of giving in to her desires and hope we'll see Lucy back at Christmas. :D

Preferably sooner, but I already know it'll be worth the wait.

Reading it a second time... so good. So relatable

"Not only did I want to get everything just right, but I wanted to let myself savor this. This was my last time after all."

I've been there so often. Especially in the early days.

Getting rid of perfectly fine clothes, corsets, breastforms, hippads. Only to "have to" buy those again.

Why, I don't know. Not wanting to give in? Wanting to conform to the norm? Embarrassment? Fear of where it might take me? Fear of social (family/friends/colleagues) consequences?

I guess a combination of all of the above.

My current partner (girlfriend) is the only one who knows about that past, though she has never seen my other side... unfortunately she has a negative view towards it and finds it hard to discuss it.

We've been in a relationship for 12 years now... It's been 5 years since the last time I dressed. I was only able to do so as we didn't live together. I miss it, but I love her too much to blow up the relationship.

My "want" or "need(?)" to dress comes and goes in waves. Sometimes I don't think about it for a while, but then it suddenly comes back... I have to admit, it often seems to happen whenever we go clothes shopping. I think I'm more interested in female clothing than the male clothes I try on...

Yesterday, for the first time in years I finally mustered the courage to bring it up (as the last time was more of a fight than a discussion) and she seemed to recognise and acknowledge it is indeed a part of me... I didn't want to push the subject much further as I want to give her time to process and think about it. I have a feeling we'll come to a mutual understanding. :)

Anyways, sorry for the long comment ramble... guess I needed it.

Love your stories and hope you'll make this into a series. <3

Highly erotic and VERY well written!

I enjoyed the story very muchI It certainly should be a series! I can see it going in every direction especially Kelsey mentoring Lucy to become a passable woman enjoying her own wardrobe of female attire! Perhaps even meeting a young lady that enjoys a male crossdresser or eventual trans gendered woman in Lucy! No one knows how far the femininity can go once the desire has been started!

What an excellent read! Lucy is a new favorite that I can hardly wait to get more of!

I would love to fully experience that in real life.

I just finished the Women's Studies series, LOVED it, would love for it to have continued in some fashion but guess it came to a nice ending.

This one seems like it sets up nicely for a long series as well, hope you have the time and desire to continue!

Loved it! Would really like to see more.

Superb timing as you let Lucy grow into her sluttish side.

Write a Christmas story please

I have created a rough outline over the last 5 mins of how the story will progress. I have no ETA on completion, but I do know how it ends. If Women's Studies taught us anything, When I say there is an ending, there is an ending. Still got some other stuff on my plate currently, but The Looking Glass Ch.02 is a future certainty.

And you can thank the Anon commenter above me. I don't know how, or why, but I read their comment and thought about the story for a second, and it clicked. Just goes to show you, comments make all the difference to writers!

SoB_Erotica

Thank you very much for writing these stories! I have loved reading them and have brought me great pleasure in these times. Keep it up!

P.S. Transgender/Crossdressing Stories are my favourite.

As a sissy who lives in London, loves good build up and well crafted writing, as well as a dose of realism, this was so perfect and well done. Please write a new Christmas based chapter!

My only qualm was as a Londoner, I found the descriptions of the city a bit lacking, but for an American you did a pretty good job!

If things like this could be widely and publically acceptable, you will definitely become a worldwide best seller. I just love reading your stories, these are so well written and immersive. Thank you so much for writing so beautiful stories.

Such an amazing story. I have recently found myself wanting to wear woman’s clothes and it’s been a little awkward with my wife. I hope that one day I will get to feel a cock in my mouth and feel a hard cock slide into my ass! This story had my total attention from the first page to the last. I couldn’t stop reading until I was finished. So sexy and beautiful! Thanks!

Hopefully I’ll get up the courage to ask my wife for help finding a man for me to pleasure! And for him to fuck me silly! Any tips would help!!

Big fan of your stories! The scene in Women’s studies where Lexi hooks up with Josh sent me into trans-kink subspace, and I was hoping for more like this! What a thrill to read this one ... topical and so hot! You’re a superb writer and a master at delving into the wonders of fluid identity and desire! Please keep it coming!!!

Loved it, please continue with Lucy's adventures on either side of the pond.

I loved this story! It completely hooked me from start to end, and the twist ending was so well done too - especially once I realized that it had been foreshadowed, of course that’s why Kelsey doesn’t mind not having blinds on her windows! That’s what makes it a true “surprise” for me, that I could have worked it out but didn’t want to as I was so wrapped up in the story and enjoying it reaching its conclusion naturally.

Echoing other comments here: more please!

The early contrivances not withstanding, this story is one of those delightful surprises. It is both entertaining and extremely well written. The plot-turn, with the arrival of Kelsey, is delightful. Lucy has walked into a trap of her own making and she is most willing to remain there. But you leave us back home in New Mexico, where she is both willing and wanting. Like any good serial, we want to know what happens next.

So hot. So very, very hot.

Please write more of this story. I was initially expecting Kelsey to come back unexpectedly, but by the time it happened, I'd forgotten and I loved the surprise.

I want to hear about Lucy dressing up before she gets back to London at Xmas - some video calls, Lucy's adventures exploring herself etc.

Please do continue this

xxx

Outstanding in every aspect, just completely incredible!!!!

I only recently found your work. Binging in no time through your masterpiece; social studies. I was shattered when it was over, knowing that I would never again learn anything new about their lives, not seeing Lexi watch her sister and Kennedy go at it or discover what other mischievous things would go on in their bedrooms.

Luckily for me I found this work too, I love to see you write about crossdressers, and all the naughty little troubles they run in to! Please take thos as a compliment on your excellent writing and let it motivate you to bring us many more gems!

This certainly has the potential to rival women's studies. I do hope you continue it. As a transwoman, I find it very difficult to erotica that is anything more than fodder for fetishists. It's rare to find a character that I can actually identify with on some level. More so in the case of lexi, but I can see a path for lucy there too. Eagerly awaiting updates.

Please make this a series, it's extremely well written and I would love to know more about Lucy's life.

A fantastic erotic story. Please make this a series and tell us more about Lucy's life and am certain it will suck me in, turn me on and cause me to urge lucy on to more adventure as Lucy embraces her newfound femininity.

i LOVE this!! i would definitely enjoy it being made into a series!

Hi SoB,

I loved your descriptions of how Luke was drawn to crossing. It was very familiar to me - what was going on in my mind the first times I slipped into my sister's software and silky things... I remember the feelings that came for me in high school when my girlfriend dressed me in her cheerleader uniform for a school event. I was scared and excited, shy and aroused the whole evening and didn't know how I could handle changing back to boy-mode after feeling the experience of being out as a girl... -sigh-

Also, great job negotiating the age restrictions here on lit. Coming up with a character who is both over eighteen and so inexperienced often comes across as contrived, it you managed to tell a great tale that managed it seemlessly. Great work! I look forward to more, hopefully added to this piece.

-AB

Thank you for writing this

Absolutely fantastic.

Well written. Goodbye development with a great ending.

Wow! Sexy!!

Loved the story. It made me long for dressing in sexy, slutty clothing.

My mind is still contemplating joining the three of them for Christmas!

I wrote a long winded response to your brilliant story, then I had to login.

I loved that Kelsey had been an indirect witness to his walking on the wild side and that she joined in with her lover to use him as their pet slut. I came as he was ridden by Cole with her watching, it was so hot.

This story too begs for a sequel.

Yeah! More, More! 11 stars!

Well written and very engaging, as with your other work. Would love to see Luke/Lucy return to London!

Amazing story so hot and seductive!

You weave a world that swallows me as I read. Thank you so much!

Please continue this story it is so amazing

Thank you for taking the time to write this story. I enjoyed it very much, so much so I ended up reading it a second when looking for something to read. I am hoping you will continue writing and adding to the story.

This was amazing

I loved the way he permitted himself to go further and further, and the ending was great!

Such an awesome story of discovery! I see the author hasn't written anything in almost three years. Hopefully, she'll write again soon. Such a talented author.

Brilliant story with an almost perfect ending

So intense. Loved it ! X