by lesbian_luvr
There is nothing like a hot erotic lesbian story. And this was nothing like a hot erotic lesbian story. 1star because Lit does not give the option of zero, which they sorely need to do.
This was absolutely horrid. The most helpful suggestion I have is that you take up knitting for a hobby because you haven't the slightest bit of talent for writing erotica. Sorry but this was plain awful.
You're a straight man - maybe you should start off writting about a subject you actually have some experience in?