All Comments on 'The Love of Two Sisters'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Wonderful story

I hope you will continue with this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
eh

it wasnt very detailed when you came around to talking about them having sex.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
more please

detailed sex was a bit lacking but the love and story were definitly there. If you'll do more i'm willing to wait for the detailed sex.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
My only complaint...

Was that you had this wonderful, beautiful, strong tomboy and you turned her into some big breasted fem. I hate the fact that tomboys don't get the attention that they deserve. Other then that it was a wonderful romantic story.

link88link88about 10 years ago
kew

Sweet ending <3

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Touching

That isone of the most beatiful and touching story I've read. Keep it up please.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Longer story would have been great..

Adding an intimate bath scene...sex toys session...anal love..

Outdoor scene..bondage..lovemaking in a dark theatre..

As senior citizens..

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