All Comments on 'The Lynches: Challenge Accepted'

A beautiful addition to the love John and Michelle share. Hopefully Sarah and Naomi join the fun.

Michelle and her Dad can leave the story of the pee out of what they tell Mom, but I sure am glad you included it here! The way you treated such a taboo topic was completely brilliant. What a talented writer you are. I wonder how much of this is autobiographical? Five stars from me, your fan, JB Edwards

FANTASTIC STORY

I love this series

I look forward to the next episode

Well, well, well....look at my little girl growing into watersports! You have no idea how proud this makes me to see you writing, and to include my favorite topic. What a great story. Just one more reason why I wish I was your dad. Five Star Effort for sure.

And more to cum also, I'm sure. I love every bit of your story, young lady, and look forward to more of it. I anticipate an FF story and an FFM story will follow. And maybe even an FFFM depending on Naomi deciding to accompany Sarah when she returns to her home upstate. I agree with JB that you write very well. Five stars! Thanks for writing.

You surely weaved an extremely kinky story young lady.....Loved it!

And the parallel story lines. Eager to see where this goes. Keep it up! I sure am.

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I enjoyed that story all around. I think your naughty mind is fantastic for story telling. Thank you for sharing.

Your stories are so well done I have forgiven you. Like you need my forgiveness, I know. Not totally against pee play, used to do it with the ex wife, in the ocean or nearby lake. Warm and kinky, but didn't have to put up with what we considered undesirable. So carry on you naughty kinky girl ! ! !

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Golden Showers are rarely my favorite, unless it is with you,

This is my 3rd time reading this story and I enjoy it each time.

Please give Chico a pat on the head and a special treat.

Great idea to add your Mom and her best friend in the stories. I do not remember if your Mom and Naomi were together in other chapters. It makes for an excellent adventure. It was especially good the way you intermingled the sex with you and your Father and your Mom and Naomi.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

absolutely amazing. enjoyed the watersports and eagerly anticipating the next in the series.

Gotta love the Lynch family. And pee play!!! I love your kinky mind girl.

Fantastic story and from someone that has ridden that train to Penn countless times I love how you got all the details right. Keep up the good work.

Loved how the descriptions weren’t clumsy. Excellent and erotic story with lots of places to go!

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Loved where this story ended. Can pick up on glimpses of real experiences shining through on this story.

Keeps getting hotter and hotter mmmm. Can’t wait to read more about this hot family.

Slut Sarah cheats by fucking Naomi yet wants to be disciplinarian at home. The hypocrisy

No matter how often I read your stories your talent never fails to amaze me! This one as all is extremely well written. So descriptive and detailed it feels like I'm there watching. (I wish) I've never been into water sports but with you I'd love to do it.

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