by redkissy
I love the way this story came together. I also wish I had neighbor like Lily. There was enough sex to go around for everyone. I like the way the two sons were able to have sex with their mother without her appearing to be a slut. Their coupling seemed warm and natural. Once the sex got started, it flowed naturally. Good job! I can’t wait for the boys to come home for spring break. Maybe they can bring their girlfriends home to meet Mom. Lily appears to enjoy sex with young women as much as she does young men.
fantastically sexy erotic story. MORE!!!!! 5 stars - wish i could give it 100
The story was worth 5 stars. Maybe 6. The excessive number of typos, grammatical errors, punctuation flaws, etc. rated the story a 3 or less. I gave it a 4.
You should understand that all those errors subtract from the enjoyment of the story...which was outstanding. Do it justice by writing it correctly. Clean up your presentation and you will reap plenty of 5's.
This part 2 of a story? You mention previous sex between Scott and whomever I is. Is this gay sex?
This is the second part from the story Halloween is fun for everyone in coupling.