All Comments on 'The Marriage Ch. 07'

As usual.

I don't know what I am going to do when this finishes - each night (Australia) I look for the next instalment ... and smile when I see it ... thanks for this - I am still enjoying the series.

I agree with cliquegge. It is interesting that Lit is read all over the world. Again, sorry to be limited to only five stars. I am both looking forward to, and also dreading the final two chapters.

I should have qualified "dreading." It's because I do not want this adventure to end.

Believe it or not this very complex marriage has got me wondering. Could have Uri been in love in Lylle and for this reason he is so angry with his broken sister.

Thankfully someone else is proofing this story- it needs it, but if you get past that, you can't stop reading this wonderful work. I, also, believe Uri has had it for Mylle and is jealous of his sister and I think they are all gonna keep it "in the family" soon... Can't wait for more chapters to see where the story goes.

what of the consul. Will not the commoners rise.

5* for you.

get rid of mylle and alia

I spend hours on these stories. Once I start I cannot put them down.

All else suffers.

That was beautiful. And unlike the other commenter, I think that Mille and Alia are vitally important for the plot. Without them it would have been your standard 'boy who doesn't like girl who doesn't like him either but thrown together by circumstances, they find true love' story.

Boring!!!

The story would fail if any of the characters had not been included. Thank for sharing this story and your others.

I kep coming back to this wonderful tale. Exquisitely written and timeless

I see turmoil with the arrival of King Uri. He is a storm that precedes a disaster. Will be interesting to see how King Cayden reacts to the Uri threat. Will the kingdom survive? Will the family survive intact? LP

It is weird how much of a cuck he is. His wife is not aroused by him and she has sex right in front of him. To each his own.

The story seems to be losing steam. Getting deep into the labyrinth of triviality. I think I will tolerate one more chapter.