All Comments on 'The Mask'

Interesting concept~ Playful and descriptive, great story Good Luck and Happy Hallowwen (~_*)

It was an interesting concept - some mystical, erotic powers contained in a mask - but the encounters between the characters were almost comical. I would have loved a story where the couples fought their forbidden, uncontrollable urges until they finally succumbed to them. Slow, erotic stripping off of their outfits...the women's clothing could have been much more provacative.

I hope you try again but with more eroticism!

That was one funny story. The idea of a mask with powers was a good one. My only complaint is you didn't make it a real foursome with the twins. LOL

Good luck.

... and the birds repeating things was a riot. It would've been hotter had the encounters been a little less rushed and the physical stats downplayed. Good luck!

The birds were a nice touch. A really cute story even though incest isn't my thing. Good luck!

You hit the nail on the head with this one!

great story, where can I get a mask like that?

Those birds are great! Good luck in the contest! LL

Funny, too.

tale. well written and I loved the birds. Thank You. Ronnie W.

Way too cursory and quick. No real depth.

Wished the mom had tried it on and then fucked her sons/nephews.