All Comments on 'The Massage'

by hergasm

Sort by:
  • 1 Comment
Sailman66Sailman66over 6 years ago
Short and sweet

Good story again. Another possible real scenario but not highly likely. Apart from two words I felt weren't used correctly it was a great quick read. Only suggestion I have would have is to pad out the actual massage a bit more with a bit of description of Dante massaging her upper back, stomach breasts etc. I look forward to your next story.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous