All Comments on 'The Masturbatrix Ch. 01'

Once again, I think another chapter would make a great series. I will even volunteer to replace Scott as Amy sounds like an extremely interesting and talented young lady! What an amazing experience that would be.

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An excellent albeit frustrating story. Frustrating for the protagonist anyway...

This was an amazingly erotic story, with a wonderful build up. I don't think I could take what he went though, but what a delicious fantasy!

Well done !

Nice premise.

Pretty well written (except for YOUR when you meant YOU'RE). But not enough details. Story says she teases mercilessly, but not enough details of the teasing. Also, could have been some dialog about the jerking/reasing while it was underway. Asking him how he liked it so far. Asking if he'd like it slower? Faster? Harder? Softer? Asking him to describe how he jerked himself.

Four stars.

Brilliant tutorial, but Amy stopped in the middle. What happened during the rest of the evening?

love the story. imagine he finds himself restrained and playfully teased. Oh yes, I'm sure there is more.

also might imagine before she is fully done he is begging her to stop. She says she will, but that is all he will get from her. At the moment he needed relief. After the relief, in fact weeks later, he needed more. he called, he wrote, eventually begging to do exactly what she wanted for as long as she wanted it. Oh now he was in trouble

5 stars

I am surprised she didn't use her mouth or bite it more.

Loved it. Can't wait for chapter 2

Thanks very much to everyone for their feedback. It is honestly and sincerely appreciated.

I LOVE this concept...I'd get my right arm to find my own Maturbatrix

Good premise.

But sex is simply so automatic.

Among othet things it needs is more dialog. More discussing what she's going to oi next. Asking if thats the way he likes it?

Three stars.

Strange. I guess there must be some girl like this out there but somehow I doubt it. The new cardinal rule is that woman demand their own multiple orgasms, not caring if the guy gets off at all.

"I am the final authority here..."

Walk her the door, open the door,"Welcome to the great outdoors!" Followed by a gentle push in the back. Close door.

End scene.

If you have to demand to be given authority, you've never had it.

Someone truly in charge, only has to ask.