by Watcher98
Very intriguing and I like the tone and the tempo of the story. But please focus on the sex in later instalments as much as you've focused on the character developement so far. Go go with your fine work!
Left me begging for more in such a good way. Great development, and why rush when the teasing is so good. Can't wait for the next chapter...
Just as Chapter1 setup Chapter2, Chapter3 was a great teaser for Chapter4. Can't wait.
There is nothing new in the story. Same old thing has been repeated again. She surrendered herself to her father's rival only to protect her father. We have to see if her father is a real man who would protect his family or proves to be the same old looser. And we also have to see if she is strong enough to fight back to get back her dignity or another looser who would let 'others' decide her fate. Please do continue the story.
All I can say is more please. So many possibilities. Cannot wait to read more.