All Comments on 'The MILF in 101'

A little rushed, but I liked the whole setup. Also, I'm a sucker for the whole sports bra look, thanks for adding that in. Looking forward to the next chapter.

5-stars.

Why was the MC moving into an apartment? Divorce? Just a break-up? He mentioned he had a roommate that only gets mentioned when talking to the MILF? Also, the only indication that she's a parent is that he knew she had a kid, which is only mentioned when he tells her that he and this roommate referred to her as a MILF.

Bones of a decent story, but could use some fleshing out.

Chapter 2 please.

Good job building and maintaining through to the end. When is part two due?

Definitely looking forward to the next chapter.

Thanks for the feedback! This was my first story that I had written so I definitely needed some refinement. I’ll expand more in the future and start working on part 2! Glad you all enjoyed it!!

Great build up. Please improve your editing because there were a few small spelling mistakes

Outstanding Read!! - what a neat story! Brilliant group of characters and interesting plot. Thanks for writing this story. 4 stars

Love it keep going

Great start

When is part 2?

Soon I hope, please.