All Comments on 'The Missing Ingredient'

Wow! I liked your story very much. It's a good thing I can't stand fruitcake.

It's a good thing I don't like fruitcake, I believe I'd have trouble eating one this year, lol. Good luck in the contest. ~Minx

The opening was a tad slow but, as someone who hates fruitcake, the ending was perfection. Very imaginative. Good luck in the contest.

Rumple

It was an excellent plot with a fun twist at the end. My biggest quibbles would be that it was a little over the top during the sex scene (cum dribbbling out of her nose???), and I thought the demon was unnecessary. You could have done it so that it was like an accident, but left us wondering if it was more. Personally, I like stories that are more on the mystical.

Still, I thought it was a good example of a short story that told me everything I needed to know. Good job.

....Des

Start with eritoca and end with Horrer or was it humor? Either way it was nicely done. Thank EL for the vote, I saw it on her begging page, glad I read it. Good luck to you in the contest.

DG Hear

friggin' brilliant! Good luck!

What do you mean, this dog won't hunt!? I loved it! :) Funny (or not) I just read this today and submitted my own EH tale tonight (just under the wire) with a strangely similar theme... we shall see! I think there should be lots more xmas erotic horror tales, I love 'em!

Great job, good luck!

I knew there was a reason I never liked fruitcake. A fun story, TE ... with just enough creep factor to keep the horror category.

Nuff said.

Well done TE.