All Comments on 'The Mission'

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RePhilRePhilalmost 9 years ago
Steven is an absolute loser.

WOW! First time I was on the cheaters (her) side! How to lose when you think your winning. Pretty good story and one of the best WACC (Wimp Ass Castrated Cuckold) characters crafted in this section. Well done!,

MitchFraellMitchFraellalmost 9 years ago
Why did she take him back?

Let's guess. Either he was a fantastic lover or he earned good money or because she could knowing it would piss off Candy. I know what I would guess at. Nicely told anyway.

honeylicker1124honeylicker1124almost 9 years ago
Our society is obsessed with a woman being thin.

Being sexy is a state of mind, not a value on a weight scale. She could have kept him from roaming, even at 168 lbs. if she had the sexiness in her mind and her heart. A BBW can be more desirable than an anorexic woman obsessed with her looks.

That being said, even though some of you say it isn't plausible for her to lose that much in 5 weeks, and she would have flopping skin, remember these are fiction stories. Wifey giving Miss Candy a good ass whooping in the grocery was a nice touch. Because at least you can write with correct grammar and spelling, I gave you 5 *'s.

chytownchytownalmost 9 years ago
Good Read****

A female point of view story written by a female, I like it!!! Thanks for sharing.

SplitAcesSplitAcesalmost 9 years ago
You're my kind of loving wife!

But Steven doesn't deserve her; hell, few men would! Good story! Loved her character.

unpublaauthorunpublaauthoralmost 9 years ago
Love it!

So incredibly awesome!

TornadoTysTornadoTysover 8 years ago
Good Read

A very good a loyal loving wife character for a change.

Well done a good read

Vito1960Vito1960about 8 years ago
Loved it!

This story reminds me of what my wife would do!!!

silentsoundsilentsoundabout 7 years ago
Mixed feelings

But enjoyed it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
@honeylicker

First 5 foot 7 inches 168 lbs is not necessarily fat or bbw...could be heavy because muscle is heavier than fat...that and females past certain age tend to lie about weight. College girlfriend was 5' 10'' 145 lbs barely A cup slender and toned from bucking bales on ranch she grew up on.

7 of top 10 sexiest females I have had sex with exceeded 150lbs and most had fantastic bodies.

Possible to quickly lose weight without ugly folds of skin though losing 300 lbs would have that result.

When I was 53 and had been laid up for months with ruptured disc in neck I slowly regained muscular physique.

Final push 100 degrees that August I fasted one day drinking only water with fizzy diet aid-forget name, second day ate 1steamer pouch vegetables. Repeated on day 3 and 4. During those days I wore cutoffs and heavy sweatshirt and used old style clippers to trim hedge and dug up dirt in my huge garden area-100ftx75ft. Worked for hour, rested hour repeat...sweatshirt was soaked but also acted like swamp cooler

4 days I lost 28 lbs skin tight and taut. Did get up at 3am took hour long walk-3 miles-twenty minute mile optimum pace to burn fat. Then did 60 cross training 6 minutes 45lb dumbbell weight training including 45 bicep curl sets alt with 6 minute Nordic Trac. Finished with Pilate floor

Weigh 175 5'8'' most people guess my weight at 150-muscle is heavier than fat.

My take on story-she got fat and disinterested in sex rejecting husband...he got fed up looked elsewhere

She got smarted worked to get in shape and that changed attitude.

My wife gained weight but I kept telling her I still desired her...perhaps more so than 20 years before. Romanced her but she refused to have sex. Didn't think I could want her. Showed her Lane Bryant models...how sexy they were, bought lingerie from them...didn't work...for 20 years I had refused numerous advances...she knew her friends had blatantly come on to me...problem was she just shut down sexually-warned her no change and one day I would not say NO to sexual offer. She said she didn't care-go right ahead...gave her 18 months...one night gorgeous female 17 years younger than me whom I had never seen before walked up to me in bar and asked me to take her toher place and have sex with her. I went

No divorce-she lives in trailer on my property-wife that is-I live in house

We get along great-work in yard together-help each other out.

My sex life is at 58 is best ever I just do not bring anyone home...four females let me spend night

28yr old 48byr old, married 34 year old redhead perfect 35 Cb cones with huge cherry nipples, married 59 year old strawberry blond loves to cowgirl up and grease saddle horn multiorgasmic

They all sought me out and only one is slender others are so pleasingly erotically sensually plumplypadded

Love watching and feeling the waves roll

betrayedbylovebetrayedbyloveabout 7 years ago
Damn

He doesn't deserve his loving, faithful wife. He cheated and she broke her stones to get back in shape to lure him back? Damn, he's a loser and she will find out eventually.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Just another wimp story

WHY??? would you want a cheating asshole back?

LilacQueen15LilacQueen15over 4 years ago

Perhaps she wanted him back because she understood she contributed to the situation.

LT56linebackerLT56linebackeralmost 4 years ago
Great story

Don't listen to anybody else. She realized she could handle the mission herself, so she did .When a woman cheats, she has all the cards. And it' s almost impossible for a guys ego to get over it. Just look at the way he reacted. !2 years old, and mommy was telling him the way it would be. My wife read this , and the lady laughed herself silly. Then she showed a couple of our daughters. The laughter continued. No alcohol was involved. How does the male of the species even survive, much less flourish. I just pray they never realize they could take over.Oh, I was just informed they already have. The Bear approves. Coming , dear.

The BEAR

26thNC26thNCover 3 years ago

Pretty good little story. Love the Alpo can too. Bear, the Commandant is concerned with your mental hygiene. Showing your porn to wife and kids is not recommended. The Bear has transgressed and will have no cigars for thirty days. Go forth and win no more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Loved it. Really nice little story

Dry_opinionDry_opinionover 2 years ago

Good story, but weak-minded men is not my kink.

NovemberComingFireNovemberComingFirealmost 2 years ago

It makes sense. A weak minded woman and a weak minded man. They deserve each other. Stupid af

EastCoaster1EastCoaster1about 1 year ago

The fourth star was for the Alpo can !

Rbtctrl1957Rbtctrl1957about 1 year ago

Most people know that a shake of the head signifies a no, and a nod of the head signifies a yes

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I agree with some commenters that both are weak. Hope they never pass on their genes. Now to the story telling. It was above average for a short tale. I think it could have been better told with more depth, however with the character presented depth was not plausible .

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