All Comments on 'The Model Next Door'

very hot well written and fun to read. thanks for sharing

ahaz

Loved the slow buildup. As a fellow panty soaker I was turned on by what you did with her panties.

Please!!!

Well written and a great character build up to a very sexy finish. This story can go on for many episodes if you care to develop it further.

I don't give many "5"s on here but this one deserves more than that.!

Guess also that you now have another new follower as I will check out your past stories and any future ones.!* There is a reason I like this story besides of the way it was written and told.^ Enough said.

Thanks.

J

Easy going, well paced story.

Best wishes and encouragement for more. Jane Marwood X

Loved the story; first one of yours I've read but won't be the last. Wasn't too over the top in pace or fantasy, so worked nicely for me. I'm sure a lot of young boys would love to have such a similar fantasy fulfilled in the same way. Great job.

I love the story I thought you didn't excellent job was very real to me would love to hear more about the two of them

I that these 2 could have a wonderful relationship. I hope you keep them cumming.

Every teens fantasy, lol. Well written and I love the details about the panties and everything. Good flow and easy dialogue, not ridiculously over the top but believable.

OMG! Got me hard as a rock....Now I'm thinking of any neighbors that are worthy of pursuing but there are none and I don't have a lawn mower. However I do recall a worthy neighbor's daughter from 25-30 years ago. That's a different story!

Hope you write more.

I tried to think of a Kraftwerk pun but then realised it's a bit obscure.

Great story, well written. A bit less graphic than your usual works but that kept it pacy rather than each. I echo others' comments in asking for more.

Models in bikinis 👙 and young hunks in sweaty, white tee shirts? That has R rated diet Coke break all over it. EM

good basic story. I wish it had another page, as the ending seems chopped.

I agree with the idea that another page would have worked well. What's next for this couple, when does he get her ass?

I double agree that this is a page shy of completion.

I like your writing and story development. Nice work but this one is not finished! Did you get tired of writing it? One more page would do it or maybe two more. You get the idea. But still a good job.

This a a great story. Would be even better if it gad a sequel.

Brilliant! Chapter 2 and … ?

Every boy's fantasy. Well written erotica with good characterisation. Most enjoyable.

"My blood runs cold! My memories have just been sold, my Angel is the Centerfold..."