All Comments on 'The Monster Pt. 11'

Finally you are back!

I'm really glad that another chapter has been posted although it would have been better if it were much longer. When the building-up is so slow, the chapters should be longer or if they are shorter, like this one, they should be more frequent. Anyway, I wish the author keeps posting (the more frequently the better).

Another waste of a chapter this is part 11 for God's sakes

When will you tire of this ridiculous charade and move onto something that's not just a bad parody of the worst erotica available?

Are you going to finish this, or not? Again, TOO MUCH "build up"! Not enough SEX!!!

Better than the last chapter....Thanks

Great development of characters

Dont stop!

This was a good transitional chapter. I would like to see longer chapters though.

Still loving this story

Please keep it going. Looking forward to the next chapter. 5stars

I wish this author keeps writing and posting. I like what he writes and how he writes.

Haters claim that there is not enough sex and that this is a site for erotic stories. While I don't agree with them because I think this is an erotic story, I think he could post his stories somewhere else, on a site where erotic and not erotic stories are posted. So the haters won't be able to complain (being right) about the author posting not enough erotic stories on a site for erotic stories.

Does anyone actually fuck in your stories?

Emotional storyline needs to pick up speed, but otherwise still good. 5*

if you don't like it why come here to read it. I like the story the way it is told. please continue to share if possible with faster chapters

I would like longer chapters as well, but you're writing well. Don't let anyone dictate your art. Just do you and keep the quality high. 5* obviously good job.

You really really really need to finish the story !!!!!!!!!!

"if you don't like it why come here to read it"

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What part of "you have to read a story to know what is in it" is too hard for you to understand?

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The comments are clearly from people who open this series and hope SOMETHING has happened. If something finally does, but your criteria, they won't know this. If it's the same thing over and over, if you can tell what's in a story without reading it, that's very good evidence it's crap.

I like your stories but I think your "stories" are more suited to Novellas because your pacing and slow build up to the sex is more reminiscent of someone who is writing a book (or Novel-?) rather a collection of truly erotic stories that can stand on their own. Novels do a lot of character development while erotic stories deal more with the sex and spend most of their time describing the details of one "adventure" in the life of their characters.

I bet that the ending of this series is that Jack actually has a fatal form of cancer in his cock. Thus he will die a virgin in chapter 30. Meanwhile, Charlie will just keep writing more of this shitty story.

This story has been the best read I've done on this site yet. I've read atleast a hundred stories and I never go to the part 2 or chapter 2. In this case I read all 11...so fantastic! I really need more of this. Thank you soooo much. You have a gift. This isn't smut either, absolutely love it

Another good chapter.

I get that this is a series but it's way too slow IMO. Also, 9 inches is already the 99th percentile. 16 is ridiculous, like some kind of cartoon.

But the most frustrating element of this story is that the only male character is completely clueless. Massive turn off which counteracts the filth of all the female characters :S

Hurry up please.