All Comments on 'The Monster Pt. 15'

by charlieflemming

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servant111servant111about 2 years ago

Utter waste of time series. 15 episodes of exactly the same edging nonsense with no plot that can be discerned.

Please help save space on this server and DELETE THIS ENTIRE SERIE…

Of course 1 star. And I am seriously questioning the psychological state of the author.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Btw you ddnt make this part of the series/grouped

Good to see some initiative happening from Sara

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Love how this is progressing

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

When is the actual incest gonna start.

Bronco56Bronco56about 2 years ago

Still loving this series. Very hot and enticing. Can't wait till the next chapter.

5⭐

Liam73Liam73about 2 years ago

Im done with this author.

twistidmonkeytwistidmonkeyabout 2 years ago

well i would like to say the series was fun but cant gonna stop here theirs just no point to continue hope it gets better for everyone else

niks1822niks1822about 2 years ago

Stop stretching the story for no reason.

WetdirtysmileWetdirtysmileabout 2 years ago

Amazing, 5* I need more. Everytime I read a chapter I I'm in the edge of my seat. Soo good.

TopazThornTopazThornabout 2 years ago

I have been following your story, and think your writing is great. So keep it going.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I don't care what anyone else tells you Charlie. Take your time and do it like you want to do it. ;)

talel81talel81about 2 years ago

This series is like the video of the truck looping over and over just before it hits the barricade. Right when it's about to hit, the video loops. Again and again and again. That's this series. Just when things are moving forward... Next loop.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Can’t wait until you give us more chapters, love it

MorbidromanticMorbidromanticabout 2 years ago

I also keep waiting for new chapters for this story and/or for your other stories. I miss those times when the author was posting daily chapters of even three stories in the same day. I wonder why the author stopped that daily updates and only updates one story and only now and then. I'm afraid I'll never know the reason.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I hope covid gets you

jonnydoughjonnydoughabout 2 years ago

I feel like Jack hard as a rock. Then boom chapter ends and well...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

OK my first real complaint for this series. Rose is all over the place. One moment she's a concerned thoughtful friend and the next she's a devious manipulator. Then she says she's sorry and she fucked up only to immediately say she doesn't care. PICK ONE OR THE OTHER, BECAUSE YOUR GOING FOR BOTH AND FAILING AT IT

marjjrmarjjrover 1 year ago

Love this story. In all honesty, just keep ignoring all the haters out there. If they don't like the story, then they shouldn't read it. I don't see any of them trying to write a romantic incest story. Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

This is getting good. It still needs edits though.

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