All Comments on 'The Monster Pt. 19'

How long are you going to milk this ridiculous, stupid premise? 19 installments? End it already.

Like I said people.,. this series is a practical joke by the author... 19 episodes of edging....

Let this poor bastard get laid already 19 chapters in over kill

Fantastic. Kepp it up. Loving this series. 5stars. Looking forward to the next chapter

Cool, probably only 19 more chapters before he actually has sex with someone.

Edging,yes, but a least this chapter made a little progress towards an outcome. One additional star, but still a way to go.

Come on let the guy get laid already, 19 installments and still not laid. This is ridiculous

I believe the author is doing this on purpose to see peoples’ responses. It’s like a weird thrill for him/her or they are conducting some psychological study. If they knew ANYTHING about a teenage boy, they’d know this moral dilemma is bullshit. That kid would be fucking everybody in sight by now.

dont worry about the naysayers, you have like 19 submissions published, they have none. you are in the lead.

Poor guy has blue balls.............. Let hin fuck!

Let jack fuck or drop the story

Oh boy the teacher didn't stand a chance before but now it's going to be a sexual massacre

I like this story. Can't wait to see what happens next

Sorry but I need to finde this asshat and break his head open

Too short - didn’t seem like the story moved forward in any meaningful way. 4*

Wtf!!!!! When is his willy gonna take a swim. Taking to long to slay them cheeks!!!!!😕😕😕😕

Can we get this fucking idiot banned to stop posting this garbage?

PLease Keep Up this GREAT Story !!!

I like this series man, keep it going!

If you would have let him just fuck Naomi this could have been the major turning point for your story you stupid ass loser.

The saddest thing about this story is that It has a lot of potential. But the author does not bother to give his readers what they want. So this story is shit

I’m so frustrated. It’s time the pussy boy with a monster cock rams his first pussy. Please stop teasing us, we are throwing our selves at you already. You are my favorite author but I need the boy to atleast get head.

I’m absolutely loving this series. I just found it a day or two ago and have been obsessed with it. Please keep putting out new chapters.

Great story can't wait for the next chapter

I agree that the teasing in this story is lasting for too long. In fact, I think it beats his record of the largest number of chapters without full intercourse. Does it mean that it is not right now an erotic story deserving to be on a site like this one? It's debatable. I think it is erotic enough and it deserves to be on this site.

Some readers interested in this story might like to know that this author is offering the chapters already posted here plus some more, for a fee on another site. And here comes a SPOILER: the MONSTER is gonna screw his first pussy very soon and afterward, it's gonna get many, many more..

You move TOO slow! Teasing is one thing, as well as build up, BUT.....Come On!!!

You don't think we are gonna pay just to read this bullshit.

For all of you that think this is crap, why are you still reading it after 19 chapters?

I think dude's gonna die virgin...

This is Ridiculous. This story is giving me blue balls😖🙄 who teached you how to write??

I think people still read this because it's like a train wreck happening in front of you, you just can't stop watching.

This is good. But you need to speed things up a little more.

Make something happen ! Way too long.

I hope Jack comes out of his shell soon

I'm agreeing with another commenter. This constant denial of sex is just getting absurd now. He's getting it on with the therapist and once again suddenly stops. NO guy would do that. Stop dragging it on and on.