All Comments on 'The Morning After'

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Aes SedaiAes Sedaiover 19 years ago
Don't Beg.

It was a great story, but you asking for a vote for five twice made me really want to give it a one :P

JoseRickJoseRickabout 19 years ago
Like fuck...

The closing line sealed the score for me - nice work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Not the First

I'm sure this was not the first sister/brother fuck, It goes on a lot more than anyone knows. I just hope that one never gets pregnent from this. They can learn a lot from each other, which will be great in later years. This has to stop sometime, so just be careful and enjoy.

lormahoykyd2007lormahoykyd2007over 14 years ago
Science...

I loved it I do enjoy longer stories that I can get better character development from, but this one was great on it's own. I hate to have to say this again, but a non related couple has as great a chance of having a child with some kind of problem as a brother and sister in a first generation of incest does.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
:)

Loved it! Didn't drag on too long but long enough for development :) Overall, very well written. Keep it coming.

lifeobsessed75lifeobsessed75almost 14 years ago
Annie's hot!!!

Love how you let the readers mind develop the picture naturally!! If my sis looked that good i'd fuck her too!! More description on the penetration though, that is the only thing I see wrong.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
rubbish

should not be on the pill

cslt1cslt18 months ago

Ha!

Great ending.

Thanks!

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