by Ashson
that a good time was had by some, TK U MLJ LV NV
Worst story I've seen here in a while and that is all I'm going to say about that.
Either the bridegroom or his father had to fill the egregious first night void.
Full marks * * * * *
. . . but I think I’ll give this one a 5. It’s his typical lighthearted flash story, with no moral to it, just written for fun. His stories should be read in that vein, and not taken seriously.
my new year's wish, that was for you to go away and take your teenage fantasies with you your stories are about as entertaining as having a broken leg.
Let me guess, the one with the police tape around it.
I bet she's not bored anymore.
But I do wish you would have described her father in law's last pulse of life, after his son cut his throat with a bread knife.
and marriage wasn't going to tame the slut in me, after all I said I only liked my husband, i didn't love him... I only needed him for support... not sex. "0"
why some of these moralizing assholes demean themselves to come onto Literotica!!
From the way they are always moaning about one thing or another they'd be better off in Sunday School!!
"Literotica" is a site for EROTIC FANTASY!!
Anything can be done, and be 'acceptable', in FANTASY!!
If you don't understand that then go swivel!!
The idea of delivering my daughter into a situation like this would be quite painful.
What's to understand asshole. Everybody has their own idea of what erotica means to them, so fuck off moron.
This was simply a huge disappointment...maybe your next one will be back up to par.
Ashson usually meets the restricted definition of LW (an account including an adventurous married woman) and that remains true here. However, it is pretty sterile until SOME consequence obtains to the couple’s marital relationship. The degree to which that is not just missing, but also hard to foresee in the reasonably near future, make this much seem better housed in Incest or Erotic Coupling than LW!
Again loved the ending LOL seems her morning was looking up. :)
LW is where it belongs,hell she just got married that makes a wife yes? David it is the father to Brian. yes? So no incest. duh. Side tag would be ncns/reluc yep fits perfect with LW
Disappointing to say the least. I expected more sex and some sort of excitement to finish the story. Dullsville.
Did I read this correctly? A trusting brand new husband is asleep while his wife and father are having sex? What a vile concept! Divorce her as fast as possible and beat the father to death.