All Comments on 'The Motherfuckers'

by Xamphos

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
BULL SHIT- - No lady, woman, or female is

so sick to fantasize this or to write this

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Loved it

If u dont like this kind of stuff dont read it, its really simple. I loved it though it was hot. :D

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichalmost 15 years ago
The rape of mom? Will it continue without love?

A story not for the sensitive minded. Rough brutal sexual treatment towards his mother was taught to him by his Grand Father for a reason, and that being that the Grand Father knew his daughter better than she knew herself. I would hope that the son realizes that a mix of rough, demanding sex, along with tender love, that shows his mother that he loves her would be the way the story would go. I would like to see a close love and sexual relationship develop between mom and son, where she becomes completely submissive to her son, and will do anything that he wishes of her. With having total power over his mother he could train her to be the woman she was meant to be. I myself see a lot of good chapters in this storyline, with a lot of different avenues the story could take. From Porn Star to quiet lover, their affair could encompass them all. Thanks for putting my mind into overtime, and giving me the good fantasy to explore.........Rich

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Really hot !!!

Really turned me on. Keep up the good work

misterbonemisterbonealmost 15 years ago
Disturbing

It take some guts to write such a story. You did well to remove some violence and I like the fact that you left a lot to the imagination. Good work.

What about a prequel?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Good, but could be better

I really enjoyed the storyline, the descriptions you made.

However, I was distracted by grammatical and punctuation errors. You would definitely benefit from better editing - it might turn this 50 into a 100.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

more please

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

My father started me young as well I am now a married mom of two sons and a daughter. insted of having my sons horny I have had sex with them willingly and told them I would be there slut anytime they want me.

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