All Comments on 'The Mouth'

by luxzakari

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Wow!

The dialog and mental observations were as zippy and funny as a "The Big Bang Theory" episode. And the last one on the couch scene was hot as hell. Her final come uppance in the defined social scale was funny as hell. A fun read. Sparkling and diverting. I will search out you other postings and I know I will enjoy them.

plumaferreplumaferreover 9 years ago

It was a very interesting read. Different than others I've seen, but interesting - almost like from a whole satyre novel!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Wow - clearly one of the best I've read

Usually the use of the C word is only adds to the coarseness, a clear signal that the writing lacks skill, sophistication and, of course, eroticism - usually that is. Something I've learn't the hard way - reading it through. But not here. Here its used wonderfully, heightening the story, adding to the erotic thrill.

Thank you.

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