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All Comments on 'The Muse'

by Lady_Fiona

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
The concept is good

But the writing, I'm afraid, is pedestrian. No movement, no excitement. You just didn't take me there at all.

whambamwhambamalmost 14 years ago

Love the way this builds and builds and builds... the progression from tension to passion is delicious! And the details that make it come alive -- in particular your descriptions of her beauty. All very sensual indeed...

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