All Comments on 'The Music of the Forest'

by ObsidiantheDragon

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Just a heads up: You switch Ori’s pronouns for a paragraph in the middle - otherwise, fun story!

ObsidiantheDragonObsidiantheDragonalmost 2 years agoAuthor

Thank you! I'll need to give it a re-read to find it!

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Hello everyone! I'm a fantasy erotica writer with a few years of experience and a penchant for stories with fantasy creatures/ monsters, hypnosis/ mind control and substantial size difference between partners. That said, I write what I'm in the mood for, and I try not to pig...