by Samuelx
Is there some way to score this stuff as less than 1?
Well written, good job! Like any good story, it makes one wonder what is next.
There is a minor typo when you refer to Sheikh Abdullah as father in beginning ("daughter of..") and husband later.
Ignore the haters and trolls
The writing is a bit stilted, as if trying too hard to be correct you went into excessively formal.
The story is interesting, although a bit short.
and yes, ignore the trolls. Children will be children.
No one is trolling. The story just sucks sweaty donkey balls. This isn't even a erotic story. So wrong category as well.