All Comments on 'The Mystery at Faldor Hotel Ch. 08'

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track1219track1219over 7 years ago
Well done!

At first I was skeptical of this story (Nancy Drew?) but it has become a hot, well written tale rife with repressed sexuality and some kinky Lovecraftian overtones. Looking forward to more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Well written chapter. George came to Cedar Bay a virgin. So far, in just two days, George has lost her virginity to Elora (Miley Cyrus has an incredibly lengthy tongue too, by the way). And she has enjoyed Bess going down on her and she has returned the favor to Bess. Get ready, Nancy. You are next.

Speaking of Nancy. Nancy knows the Colonel is primed to have sex with the sexy teenage sleuth. And Nancy is more than willing to let the Colonel have his way with her. The Colonel will make Nancy completely forget Ned Nickerson.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Chapters getting hotter and hotter.

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