by Thisisntme
i cal this love restored than a normal erotica..... i loved this.... its more romantic... something which happens in every couples life...sooner or later... good work... muah....
This reads like a heartfelt wish rather than a standard fantasy, and it makes the story hotter and more genuine. Very sexy and very romantic!
Your story was romantic, passionate, and a both a good warning of what may happen if you forget to communicate both in words and actions your love and passion. Never assume, never expect....make sure!!!
That's exactly how hot it was...
Super Hot and very well written. But this is bullshit. She is coming home from work every night very late even on valentines day ?
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Most wives would see the candles and flowers and shriek at the dumb fuck husband "WHO THE FUCK IS GOING TO CLEAN UP THIS MESS !!!!!????"
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or she might scream "ARE YOU TRYING TO BURN THE HOUSE DOWN YOU ASSHOLE?"
Honey, if that isn't YOU, leave her where she is and stay. Fabulously written, Sweetie. I think so many of us are caught in the same web! Only most of us can't extricate ourselves! Thank you for baring your lovely soul.
The basis of this story cuts to the very core of a very common problem in marriages. Sexual apathy and inaction. Your story knocks that hurdle in a big way. Well done.
Wonderfully written and touching story. Impressive character development and subtle backstory. Well done!
Lord knows it's hard keeping a relationship fresh and exciting after eight years (or eighteen, or ...), but it can be done. Stories like this are a lovely reminder. More!
If only marriages always worked out that way... you've done an excellent job telling us about these characters in a wonderfully worded story. I love it :).
Really enjoyed this story, thanks for giving the subject the depth that it rarely sees in relationships that hit this obstacle.
Loved it! Hot and steamy with a great story line, unlike some I've read by others. I'm thinking of writing a journal and letting my man find it!
I'm bi so almost anything makes me go wild...but oh my god that made my pussy wet!!
Well written, beautiful, raw , passionate and captured the wife's emotions beautifully .