All Comments on 'The Naughty List Ch. 02'

Yay! Thank you for a Part 2 of this fantastic story. I absolutely adore the relationship you have built between Holly and Chris and how it continues to develop. If you want to get hung up on the nuances of their BDSM moments well then you are missing a really good love story building along with some HAWT sex! However for me it is perfection! You can just feel the adoration they have for each other and I will plead for a Part 3 for next year. Once again you made me laugh and cry in one of your stories. You always know how to make your FG happy! :)

Simply put, this is the best story that I have read in a couple of years. Thank you and Happy New Years

Absolutely fantastic (except for her having a miscarriage). Please say there will be more chapters but we won't have to wait another year for it. This is by far one of the best stories I've ever read. 5 stars (just like part 1) And thank you for the email.

Thank you for the next chapter with Chris and Holly. I like how the BDSM aspect was sprinkled in with their relationship. They are building what works for them in their relationship. Most stories on here go straight to the main stream porm style BDSM with little character development.

An exceptional story from a great writer

Given the 12 month gap between Naughty List Chapter 1 and Chapter 2 I chose to start over from the beginning. The benefits were recognizing there were questions about Chris’ background and a current appreciation of the perpetual disregard for Holly by Jolie and Dirk.

I always appreciate the clever digressions, the Mrs. Robinson tease, thoughts of handing out Naughty List questionnaires at the mall, and a welfare Thanksgiving dinner at a local church. All are examples of the attention to detail by SSW.

I think the miscarriage and Chris’ comment “I'd be happy to try again when you are ready,” is SSW's subtle indication that this is the end of our time with Chis and Holly. Hopefully, Holly will continue to use her maiden name or be doomed to the married name of Holly Berry. :-)

...glad I re-read part one before starting Ch. 02: A gently compelling tale, so very well written. Great detail in the (very) hot sex scenes. A bitter sweet ending which, for me, added realism.

Thank you for sharing this with us.

5* Jules

Loved this chapter! I particularly appreciated that Holly stood up to Jolie and Dirk finally. I also enjoyed Chris Berry's backstoey. As always, very gifted writing. Please keep up the phenomenal work!

Exceptional in every way; perfect in all the details.

I loved that it was equal amounts of kinky and heartwarming.

You are a wonderful writer!! I love everything about this story and these two. Thank You for sharing with us.