All Comments on 'The Neighborhood'

It was a nice read for the first part of a series. You introduced the son, daughter and mother. Now are you going to develop the relationships between them. I can hardly wait to read the next chapter if you make this into a series.

I really do hope that there is more to the story that will be added later than is currently posted here. It seems like a good start to things, but on if left as is on its own, it will be disappointing. There is a nice teasing tone to parts of it, but not enough to make it fully interesting. The switch from point of views is a bit odd, but seems intentional so not too big a deal

Hope you keep the series going. nice opening chapter.

nice story begining! congratulation for effrts!!

make it more hot!! love to chat with u and discuss ideas lol chnath@gmail.com

best story to be nominated for the most entertaining text flick here around! You should become a storyboard writer, this was like a popcorn movie as American Pie is going to porn! I loved your changing scenes and cutbacks and all that ironic humor. I seldomly had such a happy time reading outside the humor section on Lit. But I'm still somewhat unsatisfied for longing in vain on the MILFs to become seriously into the game. I know you managed to built his ma quickly in on the end, but just the notification doesn't do it. So I really hope you don't rest on this success and plan a next part where the MILFs get their show on the youth. I will mark the day of it's release in my calendar!

I really hope that mom and sis are his main love. It would be nice if mom and son develop a very close and unusual relationship, that parallels husband and wife. Throw sis into the mix as a mutual lover to both of them. Great story, and thanks for the creative thinking and good writing....Rich

i loved ur story, it had everything i look for in stories. good scenarios and beautiful busty women. really got me excited.lol cheers

I've been reading tons of stories on this site for years but have never reviewed any--yours is the first, and it deserves to be. The reason for that is because what you have written here is just fantastic, a great story with great description (of characters as well as the erotic parts, which you have a particular talent for) and I can tell from reading it that you put a hell lot of effort into this. The language, I have to say, is so smooth and easy to read, and your narrator reminds me of some of my own characters in my stories. In conclusion, all praise. It was an awesome and engrossing read, and I would love for you to keep up the wonderful work, so please keep writing. You have a talent for imagining incest, all the dirty, sordid details which fires the reader's lust as he's reading a story (and I'm sure your lust was also fired as you were writing it). So please, write more, and especially write more incest stories! The review was long, but you deserve proper praise.

-blogger007

That's a "Peyton Place" full of horny neighbors you've got there, Fittucker__!

hope you bring out a new story soon ; would be nice if it's the same style (mom , son incest , huge tits , lots of facials) like this one

Working on my second time reading this series and it's just as good as I remember.

WOW My Hard on was ripping cloth all the way till the end

He's 6'; Mom is 5', Sis is 5' 2"; how is his erect or semi-erect cock anywhere near their butt crack or leg? It would be "at least" 6 inches higher!! I get that this a fantasy; but c'mon you've got to have details that makes sense.

loved the story, it's taking a while to get through this chapter and can hardly wait to get to the other chapters. Had to got to the crapper quiet a few times to wank as I didn't want to do it over mu laptop as I'd cum all over it most like had it blow up in my face and deprive of reading the rest, thanks for one of the best fantasies I've read in literotica so far

Hot fucking start to this series. I love long stories like this. Can't wait to read the rest of the chapters!

dam that was a hot series...

Awesome fuck-story. Looking forward the the rest.

you not only write a great story , but are aware enough to use the correct spelling of sound alike words. And I only have gotten through (threw, example) the first chapter. Plenty more to go to keep me happy.

Signed, "Sitting on the edge"

Very Hot!!

Hot HOT HOT!!!! Fucking had a ball while we read this one. Great story. May have wait a while to read the other chapters. I'm sore and His cock is drained. Fucking Incest is Best!!!

TBC

Your stories are well written and edited. However, a 5 foot tall women with a 38 DD bust would be morbidly obese..you then go on to describe the breasts as softball sized which would be at most a 38C, penises 10 " long occur about 1 in 100million males 99% of males are shorter than 6,5". My son is 8" and hates it as he has problems getting a women who will take it.

I disagree, Anonymous. I am 5' 1", slender, and my tits measure 38" around. I wear a DD cup 9but of course not a 38 bra). All the women in my family have huge tits - and we let men play with them.

Family parties are fun because we all love to fuck. My newest uncle is 6' 2" and his cock measures 8 1/2". He loves to titfuck and then sink it into a juicy cunt.

very nice indeed

thank you.

Spencer and bob ruined this for me. I got to pg 5 and couldnt continue. Im probably not going to bother with the rest after having scan through Spencers scenes then bob and kim made me want to hurl. Not sure why theres a necessity to add more lame cocks to a story that doesnt seem to need them.

Very good job, can't wait to read the rest of the series

Wish I had some girls to do that with

phoenix23ninja@gmail.com

Fuck. Yes. 🔥🔥🔥

I would have liked if the story was only about Mark and the women in the neighborhood. I like stories where there is only one male and several females, but no other males are involved. Spencer and Bob ruined the story. But it is the author's story and his cup of tea but unfortunately, it is not mine. The author likes the females in his story to be sluts and I like the females in the stories to be exclusively bonded to one male.

Too many individual stories. Like to keep it to one main and one or two secondary story pov. You spent paragraphs on tertiary interactions that didn’t fit the story and two sentences to finally achieving the plot.

Took a bad turn when bob and especially spencer came along. Spencer is raping everyone he sees and the other characters are created to fit his behaviour.

Feels really uncofortable reading that

Spen we and Bob are a couple of assailed, who deserve to be incarcerated for the things they do...to women, and otherwise!! It is too bad they have to be around.

I know, I know...the stories are already written, the characters in place; STILL...I really hope there is a change in the next chapters.

Kim and Nancy...they are a different story; I love them, their friendship and sharing of brother like they did. Then, Vivian takes her turn!!

Five**5**Stars...excellent work, easy read, nasty enough, even though I skipped some of Bob and Spencer's antics!